Allez mes anglicistes

[Utilisateur Supprimé]

Bon mes négros je sais qu'ici certains performent dans cet anglais jeu

le jeu c'est que moi pas du tout

donc bon j'ai un petit texte que je devrai envoyer à l'oral, si vous voyez des incohérences
ou des trucs vraiment de bas niveau bon aidez Edden quoi

c'est sur le film substance mort pour ceux-là qui veulent ( enfin je demande de l'aide plus sur la forme que le fond)

t'façon c'est vraiment du niveau trèèèèèès mince, alors fous-toi d'ma gueule si tu veux
mais si tu peux laisse cette merde
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We will speak about a novel of Philip Kindred Dick.
The title of this novel is « substance mort », a Scanner darkly in english.
To start, i will present the different characters .
In second time, Olivier will speaks of the univers of this novel and to finish Nicolas will make a summary of the story.
Substance mort introduce five principals characters : Bob Arctor, Jim Barris, Luckman, Charles freck and Donna Howtorn .
Bob Arctor is the pricipal character of the novel . He is a mix between an hero and an anti-hero.
He lives with Jim, Luckman, and charles in her house in California.
All characters are drugs addict. They smoke marijuana, snort cocaïne, and suck a tablet of substance m.
Bob Arctor Works for the « drugs squad » and he wearing for is job a « complet brouillé », « complet brouillé » is a suit wich change constantly of apparence in order to remaining anonymous.
Jim barris is the more disturbing character . He lives with the others but in fact the doesn’t care about community , he is a versy selfish person.
Luckman is one of the most wasted of all characters, He is all time under drugs effects. He is the most likeable Character, because he is naive, cool, and and disconnected of the reality.
Charles freck is also totally wrecked like Luckamn and he believes it is invaded by insects.
Donna is the feminine character of the story. It’s her who provide the « substance m » to Bob arctor.
Bob Although it is expected prosecute traffickers falls in love with her

[Régularisateur de TGA]

He is all time under drugs effects

[tulilupe]

...in order to remaining anonymous. J'crois pas que y'a -ing ici.

Jim barris is the moremost disturbing character . He lives with the others but in fact the he doesn’t care about community , he is a very selfish person.

It’s her who provide the « substance m » to Bob arctor. "She is here to provide the « substance m » to Bob arctor" ?

"Bob Although it is expected prosecute traffickers falls in love with her" Wat??

Bon j'suis t'en terminale et j'suis surment pas le meilleur (oh ouiiiiiii)

[Les_vrais_sales]

We will talk about a novel which was written by Philip Kindred Dick.
The title of this novel is « substance mort », a (Scanner darkly in english) .
Firstly, i will introduce the different characters .
Then, Olivier will talk about the atmosphere which surrounds this novel and finally Nicolas will sum up the story.
Substance mort introduces five principal characters : Bob Arctor, Jim Barris, Luckman, Charles freck and Donna Howtorn .
Bob Arctor is the most important character of the novel . He tends to be portrayed as both a hero and an anti-hero.
He lives with Jim, Luckman, and charles in her (la maison de qui là?) house in California.
All characters are drug addicts. They smoke marijuana, sniff cocaïne, and suck on "M" tablets.
Bob Arctor works for the « drugs squad » and he wears a « complet brouillé » at his job. A « complet brouillé » is a suit which changes the apppearance of the one who is wearing it, hence it allows him to remain anonymous.
Jim barris is the most disturbing character . He lives with the others but in reality he doesn’t care about community , he is a very selfish person.
Luckman is one of the most wasted ( qu'est ce que tiu peux dire là? là ça veut dire que c'et le plus défoncé des personnages, donc ca sert à rien de répeter après qu'i'l est tout le temps sous l'effet de la drogue) of all characters, He is all the time under the influence of drugs . He is the most likeable Character, because he is naive, cool, and disconnected with reality.
Charles freck is also totally wrecked like Luckamn and he believes it is invaded by insects. (qu'est ce qui est envahit mon edden, je pose la question.. le monde?)
Donna is the only woman in the story. It is she who provides the « substance m » to Bob arctor.
Bob Although it is expected prosecute traffickers falls in love with her( je ne comprends pas cette phrase)

[Matthias von Neumann]

Bob Although it is expected prosecute traffickers falls in love with her Although bob is expected to prosecute traffickers, he falls in love with her

Je pense

[Matthias von Neumann]

Wouuuh les vrais sales

[Utilisateur Supprimé]

Bob Although it is expected prosecute traffickers falls in love with her

je voulais dire que bien qu'il est censé poursuivre les trafiquants il tombe amoureux d'elle (dona)

qu'est ce que tiu peux dire là? là ça veut dire que c'et le plus défoncé des personnages, donc ca sert à rien de répeter après qu'i'l est tout le temps sous l'effet de la drogue

oué mais c'est que mon truc est léger, mais c'est sur t'as raison

He lives with Jim, Luckman, and charles in her

la maison de Bob Arctor

(qu'est ce qui est envahit mon edden, je pose la question.. le monde?)

Charles qui se croit envahi pas des sortes de pucerons

[xxantoinexx]

"in Donna's house" plutôt que "in her house", vu qu'on parle de la fille deux phrases plus haut
La substance M en anglais c'est "substance D" (death).

Edition: ah ils vivent chez Bob Arctor? Dans ce cas là c'est "in his house".

[ofcourse]

La traduction de les vrais sales goute bon.

Bon par contre au début :

We will speak about -> We are about to speak of

principal characters -> protagonist

[xxantoinexx]

Ou "We are going to speak about".
Protagonists ouais c't'un minimum

[Régularisateur de TGA]

He is all time under drugs effects

Remplace ça par He is always under the influence of drugs

[xxantoinexx]

Edden faut absolument que tu finisses l'exposé par "Ok ok Edden's exclusivity for you guys: say no to drugs, 24 hours"

[Utilisateur Supprimé]

Bon de l'amour mes négros, je vais remettre ça en forme

Salutations à Les_vrais_sales

[Utilisateur Supprimé]

Edden faut absolument que tu finisses l'exposé par "Ok ok Edden's exclusivity for you guys: say no to drugs, 24 hours"

[Les_vrais_sales]

(qu'est ce qui est envahit mon edden, je pose la question.. le monde?)

Charles qui se croit envahi pas des sortes de pucerons

Son corps? Bon alors:
He believes his own body has been infested by very small bugs..
Ofcourse a raison protagonist goute bon
Par contre eeueueueh arrêtez de vouloir placer speak a chaque fois mes francophones de maison

[Centre Troll]

Tu me paies pas ? Je fais pas tes devoirs

[ofcourse]

Edden faut absolument que tu finisses l'exposé par "Ok ok Edden's exclusivity for you guys: say no to drugs, 24 hours"

[Centre Troll]

He is all time under drugs effects

Remplace ça par He is always under the influence of drugs

He's high all the time

[Utilisateur Supprimé]

Jv'oudrai rajouter ça pour Luckman mais j'suis pas sûr du tout de la phrase

for exemple: he will loves roll the perfect joint for he keep under showcase ( glass?)

[ArabeDeBarbès]

what's up baby comin '